At first I thought I would need to report this for just being loud noise but no, this is actually a very a unique and impressive idea. It’d benefit from having some more notes and melodies and maybe even some chords in it so it’s not samey throughout the three minutes.
Other than that, nice work! I’m a huge sucker for music that manages to make glitchy sounds fire! 🔥
thanks for the feedback! i don't remember why i didn't add harmony, but that's certainly something i'll do next time. i tried to take the existing elements and make enough variation to last the runtime, but admittedly in this case that could have been improved upon as well
i'm glad you liked it!
Nice work! Not too shabby! I initially had a hard time listening to this once I got to 00:41 because a lot of notes sounded out of place and unorthodox. I can see what you were trying to do with it though, it could just use a bit of work.
1:23 to 1:42 sounded really cool and was probably the best part of the song for me. The chipwave meshed with the reverbed piano really good and it was catchy and on beat this time. I also appreciate the lone piano melody that followed. It altogether made for a nice ear candy!
2:23 Does something similar to the first section I mentioned but with more release with the notes. It sounds better but it was still slightly unorthodox at times but I approve of the idea you had for it.
Overall, this is musically quite nice, it has a melancholy tone that I vibe with but some of the unorthodox placement with the notes took away from it a bit. I think this could also benefit from having more melodies at certain sections and some variety with the key pattern. It can also sound better if panning is used for some of the higher melodies. All in all, this is a 6 out of 10 in my book. Good job! ^v^
Hmmm, would you be okay with me remastering this? I think I might know a way to make it sound more original.
EDIT: Well okay lol, I did not expect that reaction. XD
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Yo! Sweet! It really does sound like video game OST for some reason. You've become decently skilled with beepbox pretty quick.
Thanks dude! I’ve been absolutley milking the crap outta this site, I honestly wish I could’ve found out about while I still had my account but oh well lol
Improvement moment! :O Also, the melody reminds me of a very old song I made.
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The melody is fine, my main issue is the unorthodox drum patterns.
Yeah dude, agreed. Imma completely revamp THAT old cruddy excuse of a percussion beat and hopefully update it later today.
Yes.
The melody is alright but you should focus on keeping it more on tempo next time. The disregard for tempo in this is not good to listen to. :(
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